Webb
1)Yes, a side is clearly taken
2)Kinda. More of a statement and reason.
3)There is some counter views
4)Personally, because I'm not that interested with this. Otherwise, to some one who shares the same iterest, might like this
5)Can use a bit of work. Maybe separate into his effect other players and his effect on the economy.
6)This is just one big paragraph
7)It is clear on wanting him back for another season.
Patten
1)View point is clear
2)Problem yes, solution maybe a little more work
3)Yes there is a counter viewpoint
4)Like with Webb's story, what your saying is iteresting, but I am not one who is into your topic
5)Organization of paragraphs is good
6)Ideas develope and do support the thesis
7)Writing is clear. Overall it was good
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